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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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The stairs and curb in panel 2 don't seem realistic and don't appear to be properly scaled with the characters in the comic (a curb to a road, even in the future, would obviously be more than a few centimeters in height). It also seems a little odd (panel 4) that a lot of the vehicles presented have smooth curves while the vehicle the subject is getting out of has very sharp corners, perhaps this is to exude professionalism from onlookers, but it feels very out of place.
Unless the space in the last two panels is going to be taken up by dialogue boxes, I don't feel there's enough going on in the background.
However, the comic isn't without merit. The character designs are very intuitive, and they seem to flow very naturally, no one looking like they're in too much of an awkward pose (the only exception is the middle person in panel 2, it almost looks like he's leaning back). Your skill with buildings has also vastly improved, which lends to the excellent mood produced by the comic.
Overall, the comic does a good job at drawing the reader's attention to critical components, I'm mostly just nit-picking, but a very good comic overall.
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